Look at the following main points on the abovementioned topic. Check whether each of the paragraphs meet the PEEL technique which we have covered in class so far (the excerpts have not been edited i.e. it has be presented as written by the writer):
Portability
Example 1
Mobile phones are small in size and not too heavy which makes it extremely convinient for people to carry around. They can just slip in to their pockets and walk around without any difficulties. This is how easy to carry around mobile phones.
Example 2
Mobile phones are small and easy to carry wherever you want. People are not burdened by its size and is comfortable with bringing it. Women, for instance, usually get their bags robbed because of how valuable they looked. And they can't call for the police to report their stolen belonging as they had probably place their phone inside their bags. However, now women become caustious when going out and instead of bringing a big bag, they can just use a small purse to put their mobile phone in or inside their pockets.
Example 3
First of all, mobile phones are light and convenient to carry anywhere. It can be kept inside pockets or small bags due to its relatively small size. People tend to bring it with them everywhere they go without feeling any burden compared to a heavy laptop. This makes it popular among people.
Example 4
There are countless reasons as to why mobile phones are very popular. The strongest reason is its portability. Calculating, browsing, taking pictures, recording, all kinds of functions found in different gadgets, packaged into such a small thing. Almost everything can be done through mobile phones. Non-photographers in particular favors mobile phones as they can still take pictures without purchasing expensive cameras. This reason makes lots of people purchase mobile phones, thus boosting its popularity.
Keeping Up with the Times
Example 1
Recently, Samsung has released the newest type of phone, and they produce a charger that could be used by placing the phone on top of it which the charger only can for the newest brand that cause an increasing amount of people using Samsung causing Samsung mobile phone to be popular. People are using mobile phone because there is an advantage for using it. For example, you could contact your far far away relatives easier, and cheaper. You do not need to send mails.
For Business
Example 1
Many people has been using Instagram now, because it could share photos and videos so when the demand for Instagram increase, the demand for mobile phone is also increasing. And many business is doing business online because since many people use phone, business that open online could be more success. and they use it to make advertisement.
As Status Symbol
Example 1
Sometimes mobile phones are not used or purchased for its main purpose which is as the medium of communication. Majority of people purchase their phones twice a year because they are a gadget fanatic or simply because they're using it as a status-symbol. For example, if you have the newest and latest phone, this mean that the person is most probably wealthier than you. There are also people who use two mobile phones some for business purposes while the others are using it as a status symbol.
To Relieve Stress
Example 1
Personally, mobile phone has increased my quality of life. It help me communicate with my friends. Mobile phone is likely to be my second friend. It is like a medicine to cure pressure. For example: After having an exam, most of students are playing their phone because they want to be relax and to cure their pressure. It has increased the popularity of mobile phone.
As a Source of Entertainment
Moreover, mobile phones also act as a source of entertainment. People can play games on their phones, listen to songs, and watch videos. These entertainments serve as a relaxing time for people after a busy and tiring day. This makes mobile phones even more popular.
As a Source of Information
Example 1
Another reason is that mobile phones can give you the most recent information as fast as you need, unlike newspaper and mails where time is needed before information can be obtained. This is the reason why each and every businessman in the world has to have a mobile phone. For example, if a businessman has two meetings to attend at a same time, he can only choose one of them to attend. If the meeting that he chose to attend is somehow postponed or cancelled and he doesn't own a mobile phone, he would not be informed making a huge loss. If the businessman had a mobile phone, he could've received information and instead went to the other meeting. This is why mobile phones are inseparable from businessmen.
Value for Money
Example 1
Secondly, mobile phones helps us financially by saving up our money expenses. Mobile phones comes in features like Radio Player, video or Movie Players and the most popuar of alls cameras. Since all these features are already available in our phones, we no longer have to purchase cameras and radio players anymore, saving up lots of our money and is more affordable to many people and making mobile phones very well known.
For Educational Purposes
Example 1
Furthermore, mobile phones can also be used for educational purposes. Students nowadays do research for their studies on phone as it is very convenient. They can also join online education courses with their phones. They obtain more knowledge by doing these activities on phones. Phones are very popular among students as it is an efficient way of studying. As a result, students' grades will improve in schools.
Prof Ben
Master of Social Sciences (National University of Singaproe, Singapore), Bachelor of Arts with Honours. (National University of Singapore, Singapore), Bachelor of Arts (National University of Singapore, Singapore), Postgraduate Diploma in Education (Nanyang Technological University\National Institute of Education, Singapore) Certified Professional Trainer (Institute of Professional Managers Association, United Kingdom), Cooperative Learning Trainer (United States of America), Competent Leader (Toastmasters, United States of America), Advanced Communicator Bronze (Toastmasters, United States of America), Kyokushinkai Karate-do Black Belt, Pencak Silat Gayong Instructor, Tae Kwon Do Black Belt, Kitagaryu Ninja-do Black Belt, Wing Chun Chuen practitioner, Dragon Kung Fu practitioner
Cooperative Learning Trainer: Training of Teachers and Heads of Department at BINUS International School Serpong
Committee Member for the Association of Professional Trainers (Singapore)
Conference Presentation on "Librarians as Leaders in Educational Resource Management: A Perspective from the Ground" at the Asia-Pacific Conference on Library & Information Education & Practice 2006 (A-LIEP 2006)
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