Account for the popularity of mobile phones : Introduction

Consider the following introductions given by your fellow classmates for the abovementioned topic for the essay:

Introduction 1
Mobile phones are widely used in our life. It is  known to be one of the greatest inventions ever invented to satisfy our needs. It is very popular, bringing lots of advantages in our lives.

Introduction 2
As time passes by, the world we live in develop and develop. Trading, communication, information-sharing, everything happens on a global scale now. People's world have become much bigger. In order to connect with each other in this vast world, the use of telecommunication, which involves internet, social media, mobile phones, etc. is inevitable. Mobile phones in particular has become very popular among people.

Introduction 3
It cannot be denied that the world, ever since the creation of the first mobile phone, have been engulfed in a gigantic network of wireless technology by the ability of mobile phones to allow oral commmunication between people around the world without meeting face-to-face.

Introduction 4
Mobile phones has been used by most people in the world. Most of them are teenagers. Mobile phones are becoming more and more popular each day. It is because more phone company has been producing new and better phone technology. Phone companies has been telling people the advantages for using mobile phones.

Introduction 5
Mobile phones are now part of our daily lives. Some have even said that they cannot live without their phones. Especially now with the invention of smart phones, it enable us to do all sorts of things on our phone like playing games.

Introduction 6
Mobile phones are gadgets that massive amount of people own. This what so called as mobile phones had been improving people's lives making it easier for people to do things, which makes itself very popular nowadays.

Review what is considered as good introductions.


Prof Ben
Master of Social Sciences (National University of Singaproe, Singapore), Bachelor of Arts with Honours. (National University of Singapore, Singapore), Bachelor of Arts (National University of Singapore, Singapore), Postgraduate Diploma in Education (Nanyang Technological University\National Institute of Education, Singapore) Certified Professional Trainer (Institute of Professional Managers Association, United Kingdom), Cooperative Learning Trainer (United States of America), Competent Leader (Toastmasters, United States of America), Advanced Communicator Bronze (Toastmasters, United States of America), Kyokushinkai Karate-do Black Belt, Pencak Silat Gayong Instructor, Tae Kwon Do Black Belt, Kitagaryu Ninja-do Black Belt, Wing Chun Chuen practitioner, Dragon Kung Fu practitioner

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